Feedback - 13.01.09

Good progress here! I'm glad to see that your idea has evolved into a clear sequence, although you only have two minutes so you need to think caerefully about how tis will work. You will need to storyboard this carefully paying close attention to the timing of your shots. I'm hoping you have done this by today (as i requested last week) so that i can check and offer advice. You need to get going on this asap. Good research and evaluation of your prelim task. (Mrs A)